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stienf9



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 9:54 pm    Post subject: FFM: The Real Life Reply with quote

FFM: The Real Life

This is a web cartoon I make, I update it twice a week and have around 30 cartoons for it already up on the site. I wouldn't mind an opinion on what you guys think about it!
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 10:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Usually I would call this spam, or at least rude for the fact that it is not proper to link to your website in your first post. But for the sake of not looking like a bitch, I will humor you:

The art is okay...in a sense, it's your own style. I personally am not nuts about the "vector cutout" look, but some people like it.

However, for the content aspect: I have no idea if this comic is suppose to be funny or what? It's quite un-funny to say the least. No punch-line, not enough panels for a story (some comics only need one panel to get the point across, what I am saying to you is that I see no point in each comic on your site).

I give an F, for eFfort. You have the art talent in some respects, but for the actual story and content of the comics, it falls flat.

Now you better start posting or the spammer lynch mob will smite you with their noose of justice.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 10:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It doesn't hold my attention.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 12:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry to be a critic, but ditto on Ipsa...
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 12:45 am    Post subject: Hmm Reply with quote

Well what would make this cartoon more geared towards "Keeping your attention"?
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 12:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Meh, i Dunno... I'm gonna have to think long and hard on what I think is missing, get back to ya in the morning...
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 12:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, I would seriously appreciate it. I just want to make something that people can look at and laugh. I mean I guess alot of it is aimed at inside humor between me and my friends, but I was hoping the GTA humor would reach some gamers, especially the VD one.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 3:34 am    Post subject: Re: Hmm Reply with quote

stienf9 wrote:
Well what would make this cartoon more geared towards "Keeping your attention"?


Besides jubblies?

Anyhoo, welcome.
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