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PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 4:19 pm    Post subject: Show your poetry! Reply with quote

When's the last time I've made a thread of actual importance?

It's been a while. So anywho...I've been in a poetic mood as of late and been writing poetry like mad. I just finished a poem called "To that 'higher' feeling." And its about addiction. Let me know what you guys think and maybe everyone could post up a couple of their own work.

To that 'higher' feeling...


BURNING WITHIN MY SOUL
SHAKING ME TO MY VERY CORE
BLOOD PULSING
EYES ROLLED BACK
TWITCHING SKIN
FLUSHED RED
COLD SWEAT
HIDDEN DESIRES
MY BREAD AND BUTTER IS MY BROKEN DREAMS...
NERVES GOING
ANXIETY
CAN'T BREATHE...
LUNGS STRUGGLE...
BODY'S COLD
SKIN PALE
COLD BREATH BETWEEN MY LIPS
NERVES STOP
EYES BLIND...
DREAMS LOST
DESIRES FOUND
SOUL GONE
OVER COOKED...

My habit is satisfied.

It was supposed to be written in Caps. That's how I wrote it in my poetry book. I don't know what compelled me to write it, but I just entered it for a poetry contest so...yea. Enjoy!! Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Roses are red
violets are blue
I have multiple personalities
and so do I


TADAAAA!
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol. That was amazing.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 8:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i recently wrote a song, which is big news coz it's the first song i actually started and finished since a year ago or so. it's just a stupid song, but since i don't write poetry it'll have to do.

anyway, it's about the current situation, me unable to get my paper done and deadline dangerously closing in.

the chorus goes like this:

still got nine days til september
nine days that keep me alive
still got nine days till september
that's almost twice as many as five

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 9:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm working on a song at the moment. So far, I've only got the chorus, which goes like this

I want to be (aha)
The fool that I am
just let me be (aha)
As silly as I can


The song will be about this guy (or maybe girl) who's in an affair with another guy (or girl) but there's something that this other guy/girl finds more important than the relationship, which is actually perfect. And (s)he keeps telling the protagonist of the song that the relationship is perfect and (s)he would be a fool to leave, but if that is so, the protagonist just wants to be "the fool that I am"

It's meant to be a happy, upbeat popsong, kind of like the masturbation song I posted in the Music section a little while ago.

I actually dreamt the chorus a while ago, so I still have to find out if it doesn't actually already exists.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 10:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ooh baby I love you; can't you see?
We're about as perfect as perfect can be
To hell with that other guy
You're the one that I need
So please honey; never leave me.


How's that for the first couple of lines to your song Munan? I hope you like it cause I had to sing it out a few times, lol.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 4:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting song Aramor... uh... I mean, Munan.
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

...What?
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 5:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, I get it... just because someone says he wants to be the silly fool he is you automatically associate that with me... seeing as I'm the forum jester and all... oh wait, let me get back to work and entertain you guys...

Ahum, why did the pidgeon cross the road?

Because he was fucking with the chicken!!!

Anyway, poetry... I once wrote a poem to my girlfriend in the style of "10 things I hate about you" only I made it 10 things I love about you... can't find it back though.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 4:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aramoreo wrote:
Oh, I get it... just because someone says he wants to be the silly fool he is you automatically associate that with me... seeing as I'm the forum jester and all... oh wait, let me get back to work and entertain you guys...


I think it was more the theme of the complicated love triangle that made cfos think of you when he read my post.

Thanks, Spidey!
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 6:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah ok... well... in that case...

Oh, I get it... just because it's a song about a complicated love triangle and all you automatically associate that with me... seeing as I'm the forum whore and all... oh wait, I actually am the forum whore... nevermind.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 11:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Ah ok... well... in that case...

Oh, I get it... just because it's a song about a complicated love triangle and all you automatically associate that with me... seeing as I'm the forum whore and all... oh wait, I actually am the forum whore... nevermind.


Yah, because I was going to remind you... um...


you're over 9000!
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 1:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Frost, Lord of KaiserKold wrote:


Yah, because I was going to remind you... um...


you're over 9000!


The big moment's fast approaching - Y2Aramor!
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 3:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I wouldn't have dreamed in a thousand years when I joined this site nearly 3 years ago, I would have as many posts as I do....
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 12:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aurelyn wrote:
Frost, Lord of KaiserKold wrote:


Yah, because I was going to remind you... um...


you're over 9000!


The big moment's fast approaching - Y2Aramor!


Y2Aramor?!?! I better hide all the liquor and smokes I can.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 3:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And here I was, sort of wondering about why this thread is in Utter B.S.

But now it all makes sense. Thanks, guys.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 5:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Almost 10.000 posts on my name
That's quite a lot
But I got you guys to blame

If this wasn't such a nice place
I wouldn't have made all those posts
And still have a grin on my face


Yeah, poetry...
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 10:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Munan wrote:
Aramoreo wrote:
Oh, I get it... just because someone says he wants to be the silly fool he is you automatically associate that with me... seeing as I'm the forum jester and all... oh wait, let me get back to work and entertain you guys...


I think it was more the theme of the complicated love triangle that made cfos think of you when he read my post.

Thanks, Spidey!


.. and Bingo was his name, oh!
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 4:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aramor's name is Bingo?
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

No, that's what I call my... nevermind.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Spideygirl wrote:
Show your poetry!

There once was a man in peru.
Who dreamed he was eating his shoe.
Who woke up with a fright,
in the middle of the night,
as...

A second Covenent ship-a frigate-shuddered under the impact of multiple MAC rounds. It listed to the starboard and rammed the next frigate in the enemy formation. Sparks and small explosions flared from the ships as a gray-white plume of vented atmosphere exploded into space.

"Damnit!"


Isn't beautiful?

Oh wait, I forgot something.

He woke up with a fright,
in the middle of a night,
to find that his dream had come true.


There we go.

He is, once again, milk's favorite cookie... wrote:
No, that's what I call my... nevermind.

You're gay because...
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You want to finish that sentence?
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 5:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Four haikus I made a while ago. Attempts to paint with words.

Hills shelve green and fresh
Spring fills the air completely
It can take no more


The sun shines brighter
An endless beach to the west
In these summerdreams


Autumn, swallows fly
Synchronous upwards, then turn
Early evening


Twigs heavy with white
They bend and snow plumps on snow
Winterloneliness

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 6:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sharp teeth and big claws
Ultimate killing machine
Look out behind you

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 7:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow Munan. Those haikus are awesome.
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