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PostPosted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 12:00 pm    Post subject: I'm writing a predator book Reply with quote

i'm writing a predator book called PREDATOR:VENGENCE
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 12:03 pm    Post subject: Re: I'm writing a predator book Reply with quote

ive written 3 chaptors so far
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 1:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not much sense telling us if you don't release a little info about it. C'mon tell us the overall plot.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 1:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well the plot is. a team of special forces get slaughtered in the jungle.
one person knows what there up against.

it's in two perspectives. 1 a human view.2 a predator veiw
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Please make sure that somebody proofreads it.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 10:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sounds a lot like the first movie. Does yours have a special angle?
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 1:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hrm, sounds almost like a nvelization of the movie. With more focus on the Predator's experiance.

A jungle? What othe rharsh environments are possible? Antarcica has been taken. Urban scapes haev been taken...
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 2:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And I think they did desert in "Big Game", so maybe it could be set in the forrest? Like the north-western redwoods, or something? Nah, not hot enough.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 6:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Maybe the Grand Canyon? Or uhm, Mars?
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 9:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Holly wrote:
And I think they did desert in "Big Game", so maybe it could be set in the forrest? Like the north-western redwoods, or something? Nah, not hot enough.


The forest is taken in : predator: kindred.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 2:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

How about a cave?...nah...I dunno, there isn't really much of a choice left.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 4:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Caves are good. Good place to use vision modes. Very cramped. Bat guano is supposedly toxic.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 12:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

how about my house at thanksgiving? Razz
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 12:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Even better. Let the carnage begin.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 12:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i can see it now
"IM GOING TO KILL YOU.....RIGHT AFTER YOU PASS ME THE GRAVY!!
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 7:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pass the patatoes before I empale you with my acid full tail!
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 7:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The morning after: dude, why the fuck are my walls covered in red and glowing green paint?
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 7:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

but more importantly : dude where's my nostromo?
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 2:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Followed shortly after by The Xenomorph's Guide to the Galaxy.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 3:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

it's not like the first one. well it is a bit. heres a passage from it.

the hunt had not gone well. not even a day had passed and neke had already lost a student. the elder would not be pleased. narck'te had done well though getting four trophies. he should've checked where he was. the humans were standing over his body and one of them babbled something into a small machine. neke studied the device. small rectangular shape with a large thin cylander protruding from the top.
neke jumped from his tree into the harsh jungle where the battle of two worlds was soon to begin.

think it's good?

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 3:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm, yeah. Btw, it's cylinder.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 4:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Don't bother with typos, the last situation involving the 12 year old plague was barely affected when their's were pointed out. ....Then again, I haven't seen many of 'em posting since.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 6:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Please make sure that somebody proofreads it.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 12:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

another passage not long after the other one.

I stared over my shoulder and saw a shimmering in the trees. no time to think I just ran. The sargent saw I was running and decided he may as well run too,Only that thought was stopped by a blue light. The sargent never thought of anything ever again as his life blood poured out of him.

I had heard the screams of the sargent. great. As I ran I tripped over something. then I realised it was one of who's bastards spears. "fuck you!!" I yelled as a pumped it full of lead. [/i]
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2005 8:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

here something from my book Very Happy.

The phone rang, right after i manage to get some sleep,
i pickt the phone up and said, hello Question Sergei its me Alfred Wooden.
i said, what is it, thier after you, you need to get out now,
who's after me. cant talk right now, thier after me to.
i was scared, but i was ready to meet those who was after me,
i pickt up my guns and my shotgun, but i didt find my FBI badge.

Right after i found my FBI badge, the phone was ringing again,
i pickt it up, and said hello but nobody was answring the phone,
but then i heard, is this agent Sergei, i said, who is this,
then i heard some kind of hising, now i was realy scared.

I was trying to call FBI, but the line was dead, then i heard a
car pull up in my backyard, i run to the nerest window in my house,
the car was a big black van with a W-y mark, it was wayland yutani corp.
They been after me since i closed thier work but now they were after
revenge.
the vans back door open thier self and something was coming out,
something dark and black with a long head and a long tail and
it was showing its teeth.
i was just standing there and thinking, what the hell is this, then something entred my mind and said im your worse nightmere.

im ending it now but if you want to hear the rest of the story then
call 698... na you dont want my phone number
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